Grade 10 · Reading & language

Attach an introductory modifier clearly practice

Revise an introductory describing phrase so the sentence names its intended doer immediately afterward.

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Intended meaning: the hikers followed the marked path until they reached a shelter.

Which version clearly attaches the introductory action to the hikers?

  1. Following the marked path, the shelter’s roof looked familiar.
  2. Following the marked path, the hikers reached a shelter.
  3. Following the marked path, a shelter came into view.
  4. Following the marked path, the shelter was reached by the hikers.
See the answer & why

Following the marked path, the hikers reached a shelter.

The hikers follow the path. Placing them after the phrase states that relationship directly.

A little hint: Find the intended doer of the opening action. Check the noun that comes immediately after the comma.

A teaching tip

Ask who performs the introductory action. Place that person or thing immediately after the introductory phrase.

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