Give an introductory modifier a clear doer
The idea
The subject after an introductory action phrase should be the person or thing performing that action.
Step by step
- Identify the action in the introductory phrase.
- Ask who actually performs it in the intended meaning.
- Make that doer the subject immediately after the introductory phrase.
Example
Intended meaning: Jo was carrying the boxes and dropped a key. Which revision gives carrying a clear doer?
Answer
Carrying the boxes, Jo dropped a key.
Jo carries the boxes, so Jo is the subject after the introductory phrase.
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